So I finished this a short while ago. Interesting to see how much more work I need to put in to truly get good at this but a decent step none the less, learnt a few things. and a step by step gif: things to work on: better comps colors lighting shape language
Hey Tumo - I was with you until the end scene; is the dead guy with the umbrella in him 'another' dead guy, so not the dead guy in the dentist's chair? If so, I think this is confusing (me at least!) because it's coming so soon after the reveal that the detective is a figment of the murderous dentist's imagination. Also - the umbrella now feels strange to me - like it's any old murder weapon; isn't it a surprise enough that the detective isn't real? Shouldn't the umbrella be the murder weapon that kills the guy in the dentist's chair?
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